As there are four people in my group we decided that creating our magazine cover and poster would be easier if we split into two groups. We could then create rough drafts in our side groups and come together and create the final pieces as a full group.
After I had finished the rough magazine cover I let Scott from my group analysis it. he then also let me analysis his poster design. This way before creating a second draft we could help each other and make it slightly better before creating the final designs.
This is Scott's Poster
Obviously this poster is not complete and Scott let me know that before I started to analysis it. However I went on to analysis it and came up with five positive points and five negative points.
Positive
1. The frame looks really good and I really like the fact he has included the 'Mill Lane' title on the frame.
2. He's included both a slogan and a logo, even though they are not finished he remembered the important points.
3. The background wall looks quite good and helps the characters to stand out.
4. The characters he has included all look different and they all stand out individually.
5. The editing of the pictures is quite good as he hasn't cut off a apart of any picture.
Negative
1. Not all of the characters are included and not all of them fit inside the frame.
2. The placing of the logo and slogan aren't amazing and could be different colours etc.
3. The cutting of the characters is good, but some parts haven't been completely cut out.
4. The proportions are slightly off. they are right at the front of the 'room' and it makes it seem like the room is completely empty and pointless.
5. The picture quality isn't amazing the pictures could be re taken to a higher standard.
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